The library is closing in my town, and although there is something we can do about it, not many people are aware. I'm hoping my video might help people make educated voting decisions.
There are some changes I need to make (luckily this is only the storyboard. At the end of the video I still have the percentage 25%, that should be changed to 60%. Sorry
I liked the story and it was clear to me what your message is. I was going to say the only thing that confused me was the 25% at the end but then I noticed that was an accident. So you're all good!
ReplyDeleteThe aesthetics are cool. I like the sterile gray/green background and the imagery with the water and the house. I don't really have any suggestions there. The only thing I can say is that the photograph of the welcome to Ohio sign seems out of place as the only photo in the whole piece.
The motion and other details were noted clearly, I don't have any confusion there. You didn't say if it will have music or something other than the narration, but I don't think anyone included that info. So thats not really a critique.
sooo, good job! I look forward to seeing it finished